Minor correction, Never Look Away Chapter 10: “more subtle weedling out of information” -> “wheedling”. Weedle is the Pokémon.

Hey, I love weedle. They turn into Beedrill and are super good at stabbing people. (I am not even going to contest the error; it definitely sounds like one my pokemon-loving butt would make.)

….If people are correcting our spelling/grammar, does that mean that we’ve FINALLY MADE IT?!?!?!??! 🙂 

‘Cause I find errors in our chapters constantly, no matter how many times we go over it. Especially when it comes to formatting. Holy crap. I found a bunch of them today when I was rereading ch 17 for reference and I was just running my hands down my face like “nooooooo whyyyyyyyyy” – so you’ve really got your work cut out for you, anon.

(but thank you all the same)

Minor correction, Never Look Away Chapter 10: “more subtle weedling out of information” -> “wheedling”. Weedle is the Pokémon.

Hey, I love weedle. They turn into Beedrill and are super good at stabbing people. (I am not even going to contest the error; it definitely sounds like one my pokemon-loving butt would make.)

….If people are correcting our spelling/grammar, does that mean that we’ve FINALLY MADE IT?!?!?!??! 🙂 

‘Cause I find errors in our chapters constantly, no matter how many times we go over it. Especially when it comes to formatting. Holy crap. I found a bunch of them today when I was rereading ch 17 for reference and I was just running my hands down my face like “nooooooo whyyyyyyyyy” – so you’ve really got your work cut out for you, anon.

(but thank you all the same)

iketheartist:

gabapple:

The last one is my favorite!

I’m so glad that you like 😀 Little Vitya is the best <33333

Dang straight he is!!
Say, that cheeky French boy Raphael ?, I thought for a second that it was Niko? (can’t wait to find out soon)

You’ll meet Niko in my next flashback, which should be chapter 19. 

Rafe is a scoundrel, but he’s (mostly) harmless. He chases Vitya, but Vitya learned early on (as we saw) NOT TO TRUST HIM EVER. 

The same can’t be said for Niko, unfortunately…