Fishsticks is now at 51,612 words. I have less than 25k to go, and just finished part 3. Whew. 

Can haz lunch room table?

I UNEARTHED MY SCANNER JUST FOR YOU, CORI. 

(Well and I need to scan stuff if I’m going to include it in my portfolio).

THE LYNDOCH LUNCH TABLE, featuring characters by Cori, me, and Maren! 

Ben, Lydia, Salmon, Theo, Munroe, Alexis, Jenny, and Paige. 

Theo and Munroe are thinking about their hero, Gary. 

I DID IT… I just passed 37,500 words… my book is 50% done! 

The novelty of a talking cat wears off quick when the cat is a huge jerk.

Salmon Coal

Fishsticks is at 34,080 words now. I wrote 2,600 today. Trying to focus on it rather than how crappy I’m feeling, which is kind of working. Sort of. 

ugh

Yesterday I went through 80 manuscript pages, marked them all up, moved things around, and got it ready for novel section 3. 

Today, I spent my lunch break breaking section 3 down into scenes and putting them in chronological order. I worked up a revised outline for section 3.1 and 3.3, and began the write-up for 3.2 on the train ride home. 

3.2 is otherwise known as “the training montage” and I have resisted working on it the entire 8something years that this novel has been a thing. That’s because I have to give myself the authority to make executive decisions regarding the book’s mythology, and allow myself to roll with it. This is a scary thing to do. But after breaking THAT down into a 4 step, tangible process for my MC (I love lists okay), I think I’m ready.

The end result, I hope, is that people will read it and go “WTF why did this person figure all of this stuff out and write it down? who does this???” 

and I’ll nod and go “ikr?”

HOPEFULLY, in the end, they will laugh and say that it’s ridiculous but it was a fun ride. Because I’ll be honest, it’s way over the top but I am excited and that’s probably the best thing I can hope for this far along into the project. 

(I sometimes think about going back to the first novel I wrote and revising, but my eyes kind of just glaze over…) 

Tomorrow, I start the retyping/revising/gap-filling process. This is the turning point section. Once it’s done, the book is more than half-way finished. The set up to the climax, the climax, and the denouement will be all that’s left. 

Of course, I know that I have about 50 pages in section 4 that are just going to be straight up thrown in the trash, but shh let’s not think about that for now. 

Today, someone at work asked what my novel was about. I stared for a little while and then said the following:

A teenage boy asks a girl to homecoming but they get in a car accident on the way and she dies. Then she comes back to haunt him, leaving him to figure out the difference between survivor’s guilt and poltergeists. 

My co-workers stared at me. I stared at them some more. And then they said “huh okay!” 

…I really need to work on my elevator pitch. T~T

In other news, I’ve gone through 60 pages of the hard copy manuscript today for part three. Geez, it’s all over the place.

I finished the scene… part two of Fishsticks is written, all gaps filled and revised up to this point. That brings the revised total to 31k. 

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98/302 pages processed… though 98 is now 143 pages, so it’ll be interesting to see what the final total count is. 

I will go over them one last time and then send pt2 to my lovely betas. 

The original deadline for this was May 13th, but it sounds like they’re going to want the full thing much sooner. Ack. But hey, I’m 42% of the way there! 

(This also represents 41 hours of actual writing time from July-today.)