how do you people keep up writing these without instant and immediate responses/gratification? I have all of these words and I’m not getting RP responses so I dunno if it’s any good

guys help I think I am broken

but hakuba has proven that conan is shinichi

heiji’s sworn a bunch at hakuba

and hakuba is now soapboxing from beyond the grave (no ghosts though)

it’s awesome (I hope)

must keep writing… so I can show it… and get feedback and validation…

HERE IS A SNIPPET:

Hakuba stared, brows furrowed, mouth still open in disbelief. “I know what I’ve found in the evidence, Edogawa-kun. It’s Baskerville all over again.”

Conan got up, took his glasses off, and cleaned them with the tails of his shirt. “Oi… You really want to get into Holmes with me, Hakuba?”

“It’s better than your passive aggressive comments and blatant lies.”

“’…When you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth,’ Hakuba. I’ve already eliminated that possibility, so what does that tell you?”

Hakuba went back to rubbing the bridge of his nose. “That this is either a Boscombe secret or you really just don’t care for me.”

Conan tilted his head, humming as he put his glasses back on. “Yeah, that’s probably true. Hattori was right about you. You really are kind of obnoxious.” 

maybe the reason why I don’t proofread is because I spend all that time writing and then want to put it online RIGHT AWAY so that people will read it and give me feedback so that I’ll feel motivated to write more

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but now that turkey is over I need to write a crime scene. in hakuba’s bedroom.

poor hakuba. I’m sorry baby.