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Re: Proofreading
If you wanted to help me proofread, please see below the cut for details š
Okay, so the instructions were thus:
- Prepare 1,500 words of a current work in progress (or one picture book manuscript) for submission to the email address listed in #3.
- Write and submit a statement of need and intent, detailing why you would like financial assistance and what you hope to gain from the conference. This may be brief, but must prove that you are serious about your writing and are willing to put in the work required for improvement.
- Submit all required materials as attachments by March 9th, 2015 (but not before February 9th) to [email redacted]. Applicantās name and email address should be included on a cover sheet and on each page of the submitted work in progress.
- Scholarship winners will be notified by email and receive a voucher for tuition.
Here is my letter:Ā https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gn140arlK9Po9qN3NpUrrAmkwvBb_jDUw9lFeNwb2fE/edit?usp=sharing
Here is my writing sample:Ā https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S29Q3T_9vv0OPDPH2mrEQekddoh2QOPlYSzxOKMavjs/edit?usp=sharing
Anyone with these links can leave comments. I haven’t had a chance to do any revisions on these myself yet, so it’s probably really raw and terrible. OMG I am so bad at proofreading. I don’t need this to be perfect, but I would love it if I could get your help catching glaring errors and some feedback on interest or not. Awkward lines are awkward and I know that there are tons of them. T___T;;;
Thank you so much! I’ll leave these up until tomorrow afternoon. 8)Ā
Green & Ginseng
- green: list your top 3 motivators
- ginseng: post a photo of somewhere you feel calm

“Hmm… top three motivators…
- Reputation
- Self-edification
- …Virtus?
"And somewhere I feel calm… Hmmm.”


“Ahhh… heavenly.”
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ā: Reading a Book Together

Hakuba considered it kismet. As soon as Rei had introduced him to the wonder that was Tachibana Makoto, things had clicked into place without any sort of resistance at all. True, he was only in town for a couple of weeks to investigate the recent shenanigans at Iwatobi high school by his friend’s personal request, but he had been very well-received by the swim team and associates, which made for a very enjoyable business trip.
Makoto was of particular interest. Sweet, unassuming, charming… it seemed only natural to look to him for delegation of what needed to be done to carry out the investigation. Honestly, Hakuba could hardly ask for better working conditions on such a case.Ā
They sat on the steps leading up toward the swimmer’s house, basking in the filtered light of the hedges next to the steps in the afternoon sun. “Right,” Hakuba said, turning the page of the textbook on his lap, and pointed to another section. “And that is specifically why this algorithm works for this instance, but not for the other one…”
Physics. The interdependent marriage of science and math. Not a light subject, but one that Hakuba understood well. Which was likely the reason why helping Makoto with his homework before they got started on the detective business was now part of his to-do list.Ā
The detective reached over to scratch the head of the cat in Makoto’s lap, who purred and lazily stretched to drape over his leg, drooping toward the stair.Ā
“So you see, it’s all a matter of looking at the problem and choosing the correct formula to use for any given situation. That is to say, assessing the problem at hand, determining which variables need to be involved, and finding the formula that will get you that answer… consequently, here, it’s Newton’s 2nd Law that we’ll be using…”
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Date & Sweet? ^-^
date: do you think age differences are a big deal?Ā
heart: talk about your crushĀ
hug: how comfortable are you with physical contact?Ā

“Itās all right, though I prefer to be the one that initiates until Iām very comfortable with a person. Handshakes are generally fine, but Iām particularly sensitive to people touching my back when I donāt know them, or worse, when I explicitly distrust them.Ā
"For those that I haveĀ let into my inner circle, though, little physical displays of affection are welcome and appreciated. For example, my mum likes to tug on my arm to get my attention, and Baaya often puts her hand on my shoulder blade. Both like to tug me down to kiss the top of my head, too, and Iām fine with that (except in public because,Ā god, can they be any more embarrassing?).Ā
"I do notĀ like random people rushing up and hugging me⦠or kissing me⦠or grabbing me and yanking me around. I donāt like it when overly zealous people slap me on the back or hit me with their towels in the locker room. Iām not fond of having my cheeks pinched, or any part of me handled without my express permission. Itās awkward and terribly uncomfortable, and sends me into an anxiety-driven panic more quickly than just about anything else.ā
sweet: do you like candy and chocolate?

"Of course I do! And unlike MOST of my fellow male colleagues, I am not ashamed to admit it! I tend to favor baked goods over candy, I suppose, but sweets are definitely one of my weaknesses.ā